Learner response

 1) Type up your feedback in full (you don't need to write the mark and grade if you want to keep this confidential).

EBI: focus on the higher-mark questions [eg 8 or 12 marks ] as these are the key to reaching the top levels . 

2) Read the mark scheme for this assessment carefully. Write down the mark you achieved for each question: 

1:1 , 2:1 , 3:5 , 4: 2 , 5:4 , 6:3

3) Identify one of your stronger questions. Why did you do better on this question? Use the mark scheme to help you with this.

I connoted very well for this question and explained what the picture showed . 

4) Identify one of your weaker questions. Why did you score lower on this particular question? Use the mark scheme to help you with this.

Focus on meanings created by different elements of design and layout

is inconsistent.

Occasionally appropriate use of subject specific terminology.

 5) Finally, write a new, detailed paragraph for Question 3 - the unseen text 12 mark question. Use the mark scheme to identify anticipated content you can add to your response and make sure you refer to the text and write in detail. 

The first connotation is the colour red which shows like romance and her body language also shows it to . The font of the advert is in red and looks like its hot showing its a powerful perfume and the name 'heat' showing the intensity of emotion . The phrase " catch the heat " means that its very popular and telling the audience to buy it because its so good . It is also filmed on a low angle to show she is powerful and its showing the audience that because of the perfume she feels confident and powerful and who ever buys it will feel that to . 


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